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Re: Snow White - from an interesting perspective: PART 3
Wow, this is really really good! Great hooks-- I couldn't stop reading until I had completely finished :) Continue on! One thing though-- some of the lines can be a ...
Feb 21, 2007 -
Re: Salem Underground
Your writing techniques are completely gripping. Your opening paragraphs were everything opening paragraphs should ever be: shocking, mysterious and alluring. And of course, grammatically correct :)
Feb 19, 2007